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Two souls so far apart still intertwine.
As light travels to grow the grapes
That form the sweetest of wine.

Two hearts, together, share a beat.
Their beat gets faster and faster
As they continue to want to meet.

Two minds that think alike.
Two sets of eyes that haven’t met,
but know what each other are like.

Two loves form a greater one.
A love as can be depicted
by the brilliant colors of the setting sun.

These two souls often take flight,
And can sense each other
Even in the darkness of night.

This one heart in two,
and two souls in one,
represent me and you.

Not a puzzle could fit together
as well as we will fit
Forever and ever.
©2005-2009 ~Hitokiribattousai
:iconhitokiribattousai:

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stpid title wont let me use "=" but oh well.... get it?? like a+b=c ??? no???? losers --.--'...well, maybe im not leaving myself much room to talk lol. yes...anyway :paranoid: a little love poem i wrote in the middle of the night ^^ not the best in the world in my opinion, structer-wise, but over all, without a critic eye, i think its a rather nice poem ^_^ enjoy, critique...whatever....the point is ............... I LOVE YOU SAM!!!! :heart:

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:iconlivlou:
Ooooh! Nice one, Tim!!! See, all of that staying up in the middle of the night was worth it! :+fav: ^_^ Good job buddy!

Ooooh this poetry-off is going to be funnn!!!

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Edik: What does your shirt say?
Me: ...Kent State University?
Edik: Okay, good. I was just making sure it didn't say I love boys!
:icongfys-shadow:
nice poem man!!

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"I pretend to work. They pretend to pay me"
"Did the aliens forget to remove your anal probe?"
"Chaos, panic, & disorder - my work here is done."
-+*+-this one is dedicated to anyone i dont like-+*+-
"Done make me spray you with a can of woop ass"
:iconforever-doomed:
:chainsaw: WHY YOU LITTLE.... just kidding. XD very excellently done, and a very powerful message as always. i'm sure sam will love it.

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All heil! All heil! All heil the serpents gift!
All heil, Love fails, and Hope lies in eclipse
:iconshoakhan:
:nod: Very nicely written,man. Well done!

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T.A.Greaves,dA's resident GWAR fan.
[link] My dA gallery.
"I have come as a feral thing,
Snapping at,your bloated underbelly" GWAR-Meat Sandwich.
:iconhitokiribattousai:
XXXDDDDD ty^^

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconhitokiribattousai:
thnx :D

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconhitokiribattousai:
XD ty ^^

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconhitokiribattousai:
:D thanks ^^

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconangelo-scuro:
aww!!!!! :smooch: i love it!!!! i cant believe you wrote that in the middle of the night! thats so sweet ^^ you just made my week :hug: i love you so much :heart:

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"It never used to hurt before
it isn't funny anymore
Feeling so alone now,
Funny how you wish some way that
you could die at the hospital"
:heart: The Used :heart:

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