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Two worlds were once
so well connected
A gravity so powerful,
that held from distances so long.

Together they were so intwined
nothing seemed to phase them,
but somehow things were going bad,
and somehow oh so ever wrong.

Two worlds were once,
so close together,
they shared a special bond,
yet somehow down the line they lost
the connection that was oh so strong.

Both worlds felt
their share of pain,
yet one world could not shed the stain
of tears left on their broken heart.

If only they
could have forseen,
that this would have eventually happened,
they would have avoided it from the start.

The scars left on this one heart,
time itself cant even heal.
the most it could mercifully do,
is dampend that hearts,
ability to feel.

The ability to feel that pain,
would eventually be gone,
but along with it would go,
the ability to move on.

Forever would they remember,
the other world in which they confided,
only to remember that,
here they stand divided
©2006-2009 ~Hitokiribattousai
:iconhitokiribattousai:

Author's Comments

omg...METAPHORE!!!!! if you dont get the metaphore, dont worry, its not for you to get. jsut enjoy the poem. The rhyme scheme will jump here and there, so just try to deal with it. this isnt one of my more formal meteres, but styles liek this seem to be increasingly common. well, here ya go. preview used from [link]

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:iconhikyuutera:
It's very good... Has the feel of Temporary Heroes by Pat Benatar.. lol
Infact *was listening to it when she was reading* >.>x

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"A life is always worthy of saving no matter how bad or evil the soul appears to be..." --- Himura Kenji (notes from my fanfic)

:boogie:#UnseenArtists ^^x
:iconhitokiribattousai:
:D thank you ^^ it seems that you have listed a number of my works into your favorits, and we should both know that thanking yo ufor each one individually is rather a silly idea. So i shall save myself the effort of typing and spare yo uthe toil of reading each individual message of thanks, and reduce it all to one big THANK YOU! :) there we are, much easier ^^

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconhikyuutera:
rofl!!! you're very welcome =D xD

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"A life is always worthy of saving no matter how bad or evil the soul appears to be..." --- Himura Kenji (notes from my fanfic)

:boogie:#UnseenArtists ^^x

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