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death eludes your eager wrists
dancing on that blade
clenched tightly in your fist

You begin to cry
you want to die
nothing is fair
and nobody cares

You urge the knife
to split the skin
to leak the crimson
liquid within

death eludes your eager wrists
dancing on that blade
clenched tightly in your fist

You beg and plead
for your wrists to bleed
you want the pain to
finally be freed

the blade is resting
on your harm
you try to force it
to do you harm

death eludes your eager wrists
dancing on that blade
clenched tightly in your fist

something inside
is making you stop
its pushing your anger
over the top

what other emotion
can be so strong
its been holding you back
all along

You look inside and find yourself
and find a person crying for help
would you kill that person in need
and burden yourself with such a deed

death eludes your eager wrists
dancing on that blade
clenched tightly in your fist

with shaking hands
and a watery eye
you realize this is not
your way to die

you will die when
you are old
you'll be grateful then
a thousand fold

That you didnt
slash your wrist
and you dropped the knife
from within your fist

It would never help you
escape reality
It would have ended
your mortality

Death eludes your eager wrists
dancing on that blade
clenched tightly in your fist

There are other ways to
ease the pain of yesterdays
methods that so simplisticly
help you escape your reality

Death eludes your eager wrists
as you look at the blade that's
no longer in your fists.
©2005-2009 ~Hitokiribattousai
:iconhitokiribattousai:

Author's Comments

i escape reality by writing poetry. you escape reality, by reading poetry. now isnt that an interesting coincidence?

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:iconlilraincloud:
thanks...you kept me alive a little longer :hug:..............sounds really acward but i swear it's true ^^;

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Currently Working On:

:spotlight-left: Damnation A.D. :spotlight-right:

Current Mood: :love:

current word(s): I know, I know that you loved me. I can't love you when your dead.

current song:"Lay Down" -Priestess

:iconhitokiribattousai:
O.o for real?? wow. well, im glad i could help ^^; you know, it is the truth. there are thousands of ways to escape.

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconshoakhan:
Nice work,very well constructed! :thumbsup:

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T.A.Greaves,dA's resident GWAR fan.
[link] My dA gallery.
"I have come as a feral thing,
Snapping at,your bloated underbelly" GWAR-Meat Sandwich.
:iconlilraincloud:
yup for real, i was feeling pretty down,... thanks for dealing with my acwardness (i know it's really hard i sometimes scare myself)

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Currently Working On:

:spotlight-left: Damnation A.D. :spotlight-right:

Current Mood: :love:

current word(s): I know, I know that you loved me. I can't love you when your dead.

current song:"Lay Down" -Priestess

:iconhitokiribattousai:
ty ^^

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconhitokiribattousai:
lol. its no problem ^^. as much as i dont really look like it, i like to help people out.

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconshoakhan:
np Hitokiribattousai(wow,you've got a long name!) XD

--
T.A.Greaves,dA's resident GWAR fan.
[link] My dA gallery.
"I have come as a feral thing,
Snapping at,your bloated underbelly" GWAR-Meat Sandwich.
:iconhitokiribattousai:
XD lol just call me tim then :D

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If you won't take the time to look past what you think you see to get to know me even just a little bit better, you obviously don't care and aren't worth the time.
:iconshoakhan:
Cool,okay....Tim-San? Doesn't have the same ring to it as Hito-San,does it? :shrug: :D XD

--
T.A.Greaves,dA's resident GWAR fan.
[link] My dA gallery.
"I have come as a feral thing,
Snapping at,your bloated underbelly" GWAR-Meat Sandwich.

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